Randomman4's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

["New Energy"]

Transisitions Transisitions Transistions!

The melody was lacking very much! just made two basslines and made the one higher pitched, Basshunters songs are all fast and dear god were your transistions just horrible!

Tip, To make it sound fuller, make sure you have a
-melody
-drums
-bass
-underlying harmony slightly similar to the bass in the Midrange/high range that goes a lot faster that ISNT a second harmony
and unerly it a little from the melody, make your meldoy do MORE withouggt making it do to much, and if you are going to use vocals, use them throughought the song pLEASE

Check my latest song Future Wave to see what mean about the layering part, you will hear how full it sounds.

Other wise this is your basic song someone who is learning how to use a DAW would make.

MicroVirus6 responds:

i got what you're saying there, thanks for the review

[Syst3m Sh0ck [RNG]]

Just, Sensly Amazing

Most trance I listen to makes me feel like im supposed to be on drugs for it to sound good, man is this different, I really felt in a calming "trance" Mood, It had the minor chord to major chord mainline that I love soooooo much ( I use it a lot in my music also ) Your drum layer was nice, and man was that intro just, orgasmic. Middle of the song doesn't have enough layering though, I know its the "anti" Climax ( WTF! Nice key change! ) listening as I type Lol ) But seriously, this is a amazing peice you have hear, but my only gripe, could have changed that square out for a supersaw somewhere in the song, at least for a little bit, the Slide sound has a little to much POP when it slides to the correct pitch, hurt meh ears after a little bit.

Overall, I Liked it, and that says something, because most trance I don't like.

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Um, the only square in this song comes in at 1:10, every other thing is using some form of saw wave for the whole song, so I guess I'm not certain what you mean.

Thanks for the score!

[[D106] Jingle Bells]

Sounds to much like......

Basshunter's Jingle Bells mix, your doesn't seem to be as energetic, and it osunds like you have taken some of the sounds from the song I am speaking of, besides the main line though it does seem original enough, I'll give a 7 out 10 because it doesn't suck, here's a hint though. Lower the rest of the song and make the kick louder, it may sound fine on you system, or headphones, but listening to it with mine, the kick is no where near powerful enough for a dance song.

Oh and the pitch change is very reminicent of Basshunter also. So is the off beat bass.

[He's a Pirate - F-777 ReMiX]

Amazingly sophisticated

This got me pumped up, only 5 Songs I know pump me up this way, 3 of them are by DJ manian, The other is Chromeboy's remix of Russian privjet, and now this.

True Amazingness, only thing you should add ( And you should ) Is an awesome Low Bongo part at 8 Similair to what Headhunterz does in Scrap attack. Since its an elongated beat ( Every 2 beats make one ) in that area, it would sound amazing with the slowed down tempo.

Thats all I can think of, amazing mastering, you must teach me, I have trouble mastering.

[Speeding Sunrays]

To light for my tastes

Well, I have rated this according to music, not personal taste, This song has to light and SUPER repetitive cymbal beat for me, and the song just seems like its lacking a layer somewhere, BUT that is for the music I like, otherwise, you song works very well for light trance, you didn't use a crap ton of reverb to make everything sound Super spacy ( except the beggining )

My main note, PLEASE change up that Hi Hat line, its obnoxiously annoying and please at 0:27 where you have the FX kick, PLEASE get rid of it, it has NO place in this song, it sounds completely out of place. Use a much less reverbed kick, maybe add a vocal, or a sweep the lingering then SUDDEN effect you have there sounds good now, but for re listen ability it needs to be more interesting, and needs to lead into a heavier louder

NghtcrwlrD responds:

Thanks for all the helpful advice! Ya I can see what you dislike about it. I made this when I was first experimenting with Fl Studio, but I'll take any tips I can :) Thanks again for the suggestions!!

[Welcome To Rainbow */WiP\*]

You better finish this!

Possibly my most favorite song by Basshunter, and once you polish this and used better instruments, it would sound epic!

SubtleForces responds:

Thanks.

Ye, it's my song of his too :D

[SubtleForces - You're My Angel]

Great!

Once again you make a great song, but the vocals were WAY to mettalic sounding. And did you use auto tune?

SubtleForces responds:

Ye the only vocals find were not that good. I tried mastering, but you could still here it :(
Really was quite annoying :'(

I didn't use auto tune since I downloaded the vocals :P

Thanks anyways :)

[SubtleForces - Rushing Calm]

Wow!

Wow if your not the next headline artist.

Shoot me. Best stuff I have heard in quite a long time. Quite amazing what you have here.

You have some amazing talent.

SubtleForces responds:

Thanks alot, but I dont think I want to shoot you ;P

[SubtleForces - The Sound]

Made an account just to say how awesome this is!

Its the truth!

I made an account just to ( ok not just to, but still you made me make an acocunt! )
comment on this song!

Me being a Techno creator myself just dropped at how this sounds!. Its upbeat but doesn't necessarily want to make you dance. But still its very well put together, the melodies and piano riffs are all well spaced and put together.

This is the essence of Mastering!

SubtleForces responds:

Thanks :D Really nice to know, brilliant infact :D :D